Introduction:
- Children should exceed at as best they can when there young! At an early age they should be in a single sex environment. Later on in middle school high school and college they will get there social experienced and be an all around well educated adult.
- My three reasons
- My thesis statement.
Maybe you should include a little more background in your introduction. I just think it needs more of an attention getter. Great topic though!
ReplyDeleteGood start but I think you should add your three reason and your thesis statement so the class knows what your point of view is. But I really like your topic! Good choice!
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